So bummed that the last part of book…

So bummed that the last part of book 33 is no where near as much fun as the first part; it also lost its pacing and does not have a nearly good enough ending. It definitely would have benefited from tighter and more demanding editing. The meandering back stories and unfocused details totally need to be trimmed and the final scenes absolutely need reworking so it does not end so limply, leaving the reader lost and dissatisfied.

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May 17, 2012 · 5:54 pm

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